Minggu, 22 Maret 2015
Hello, my name is Luluk Diyah Anggraini. I’m 19
years old. I will tell you about my dreams. I have a dream. When i was a kid my
dream was to be a teacher, because by being a teacher I can share the my
knowledge. But my parents didn’t
support. I should not be the school in Senior High School and later by
my parents I put in Vocational High School and studying accounting. Since it I
like accounting until now. I chose major accounting at university to continue
the knowledge that I gained from Vocational High School. I want to accountant,
because it I almost finish my study in a university. After I graduate, i want
to work in the tax office, Bank Indonesia, Pertamina, and etc. I want to be the
staff Accountant.
I prefer to be Public Civil servant. Since it became
public civil servant after retirement still get paid. But I also want to be
businessman. After I work for 3 or 4 years I will have a lot of
money. Then, I will start business. I will biggest business my parents and
opening restaurant, because I become businessman I will can create a job and I
can help many people.
Hope u reach your dream, Luluk...next time, please do not forget to put the title ...ok?
BalasHapusok mrs. thank you.
BalasHapusI hope I can reach my dream too. Ok, next time I will put the tittle of my text.
hai luluk :) I wantcorrect your task,
BalasHapus1.paragraph 1 " When i was a kid my dream was to be a teacher" tahn correct is " when I was kid , my dreams was to be a teacher "
2.paragraph 1 " i want to work in the tax office" thah correct is " I want to work in the tax office"
thank you
thank you for your correction anis :)
HapusHi Luluk. That is good. I hope that you can reach your dreams. Well...Let me to give you a correction about this sentence " I want to accountant ". I think it is better if you use this sentence " I want to be an accountant ". Am I right?. Please correct me back if I am wrong. Thank you.
BalasHapusyes, you're right fatma. :) thanks for correction :)
Hapus