Rabu, 25 Maret 2015
Assalamualaikum wr.wb.
Hi everybody.
My name is Yogi Arumsari. I have some dreams. When I was kid,
my dream was to be a teacher. When I was studied in Junior High School, I have
more specific dreams, it is to be a Mathematic teacher. Sometimes, I want to be
a singer but I don’t have a good enough voice to it. However, I have grown up.
Now, I know what I want to be. I want to be a public accountant, became
governor of banks in Indonesia.
Now, I’m a university student at Semarang State University.
Im second semester. I’m studying an accoounting program. When I was student in
Vocational High School, I took an accounting program too. I hope what I’ve been
learning can be support to I reach my dreams. After I graduate, I want to work
in bank in Indonesia such as BNI, BRI, Mandiri, etc. I want to be a financial
staff manager or manager at least. I chose that profession because it gives me
a lot of salary.
That is just beginning of my dreams. After I can collect
money from my salary, I want to be an entrepreneur who earn more than the
salary that I get from my job. I want to build employment. I want to do my
bussiness with my husband. I will live in simple home but has a large yard for I
plant various flowers and plants, because I like the green of nature like a
green house. I will live with my happy family. I also want to take my family to
Makkah for Hajji. I think that’s all I can say about my dreams. It is just a
simple dream for a simple girl like me.
Thankyou.
Wassalamualaikum wr.wb.
what a nice dream, Arum! :)
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HapusThanks Mrs. Uut :) I hope that all my dreams will come true :)
HapusHi... This is great. But let me give you a correction about this sentence " When I ' was studied ' in Junior High School,...... ", It must be written " When I ' was studying ' in Junior High School, ...... ". Is it right?, but please correct me back if I am wrong. Thank you.
BalasHapusThanks for your correction, Fatma. I think you're right :) I will correct it in my revision :)
HapusHello Arum, I hope your dreams will come true.
BalasHapushey, I find your sentence is incorrect, "I chose that profession because it gives me a lot of salary.".
My correction is "I choose that profession because it gives me a lot of salary." I thinnk you have to use simple present future tense because it is not happened yet.
please feed back me, arum. Thanks :)
Aameen :) Thanks, Dani :)
HapusThanks too for your correction, I will correct it in my revision later :)
Thank you for helping.