Jumat, 20 Maret 2015
If you ask me, “ what’s my dream ?” I will answer , I have a
lot of dreams, but the main dream is be an entrepreneur, although sometime I
hesitate it and try to change my dream. When i want to be a teacher, I think
it’s not my passion.
After changing one dream to the other one, I define that I
want to be an entrepreneur. I’m motivated by them that have a success
business. I will improve my English skill so that I can make a relation with
the other country. I can expand my
business and make my family happy but don’t forget to basic it with pure for
Allah so that our effort are blessed.
To reach my dream come true, from now I have entered
entrepreneur organization in campus. I improve my skill from many part.
Producing , selling, distributing,managing, and everything I learned.
I hope , I can be strong to be entrepreneur and my business
is success, Aamiiin
That’s all , Thank you J
Hi Isna :) It is a good dreams, I wish it will come true as soon as you want. Amiin.
BalasHapusIsna, in your sentence "what my dream?", I think the first letter is must be written in capitalize, isn't it?
In your sentence "but the main dream is be an entrepreneur,", I think it will be more effective if you use a full stop (.) not a comma (,) because your sentence is very long.
That's just my argument Isna thank you :)
Thanks Tri Rohani. I will check it again :)
BalasHapus