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Jumat, 20 Maret 2015
Hello my
friends :) I’m Tri Rohani, I come from a small village in Gunung Kidul. Gunung Kidul is
one of the residence of Yogyakarta. Many teenagers in my village just study
until Junior High School. There are a lot of reasons why they just study until
Junior High School. First, some of their parents don’t have enough money to pay
their school’s fee to Senior High School because it’s expensive. Second, some
of the teenagers won’t to continue their study. They prefer working and collect
money to continue their study to Senior High School. Almost all of my friends
(my friends in my village) don’t continue their study but I choose the
different way. I choose to continue my study because I have many dreams.
When
I was a kid, my dream was to be a doctor but my parents didn’t allow me to
enter Senior High School. They afraid, they couldn’t pay my school fee so I chose
Vocational High School. I got Titian Foundation Scholarship. It could help my
parents burden. Since that time, I changed my dream because my first dream was
impossible. I changed my dream to be an accountant because my major in
Vocational High School was accounting. And then, I continued my study to the
college, I chose accounting major too. But now, I think that I won’t to be an accountant
anymore because one of my lecturer said that when he became an accountant in a
factory he had to make the false financial statement. And generally many
accountants have to work like that. I
think, I can’t do that. Now, I choose to be a lecturer because I can share my
knowledge to the other. For me it’s more happily and benefit.
Besides
that, I want to be an entrepreneur too. I want to be an entrepreneur on food.
My dreams, I will build a lot of restaurant in many cities in Indonesia. So, I
have to collect a lot of skill and network first, certainly money too. OK guys
that’s all about my dreams. Thanks for read my story and give me responses. See
you later :)
Hi Tri. That is good. I hope that you can reach your dreams. Well... Let me to give you a correction about this sentence "They afraid,........". I think that is better if you use this sentence "They 'are' afraid,.....". Am I right?. Please correct me back if I am wrong. Thank you.
BalasHapusI do not really understand the structure of the text in English, so I just leave a comment about the content. Your dream is easy to change, it reflects that you are vulnerable. I'm sory about it. Peace
BalasHapusHello Fatma. Yes you're right Fatma, thanks for your correction :)
BalasHapusThank you Mugi. There are a lot of reason why I change my dream. I think that it's no problem if I change my dream as far as it isn't across my major now.
I'm sorry Fatma I have made a mistake, I think it must be written by "They were afraid..." because the it is a simple past tense sentence. Am I right Fatma?
BalasHapus