Kamis, 19 Maret 2015
My Dreams
Hello
Friends.
My
name is Fatma Nur Fadilla. I am 18 years old. I have a lot of dreams in my
life. When I was a child, I wanted to be a teacher, but sometimes I wanted to
be a doctor. When I was a child, I thought that being a teacher and a doctor
were interesting job. But as the time
goes by, I have another dream. I want to be a police woman. It was inspired by
my uncle. Besides that, I think that being a police woman is a chalenging job. When
I graduated from Senior High School, I tried to realize my dream to be a police
woman. My parents support me to be a police woman. So, I tried to register
being a police woman. And then, I followed
some step of police woman’s selection. But It was not my lucky. I failed at the
second step of police woman’s selection. However, being a police woman will always
be one of my dreams in my life. But ALLAH SWT gave me another way. I was
received by Semarang State University to be their university student. And now,
I am studying at Economic Faculty of Semarang State University. At this moment,
I know what I want to be. I want to be an accountant. I will study hard and
finish my study in Semarang State University as well as soon. I will be a young
scholar of Accounting. And then, I hope that I can work in a big company and be
the important staff as accountant in there. After I have a lot of money from my
job, I will try to be an enterpreneur. In the beginning of my business, I will
build a small manufacture company, that I hope it can be a big company in the
future. And I hope that I can make my parents will be proud of me.
If I have to choose that I prefer being a businessman
or public civil servant, I prefer being a public civil servant. Because I think
that being a public civil servant will make me always get money, that I think,
It will be enough for me. Besides, I think that being a businessman has much
unpredictable risk more than being a public civil servant. But someday, if I
have a chance, I hope that I can be young enterpreneur with a big company in
the future. Amin.....
I
think that is all I can say about my dreams. I hope that I can make my dreams
come true and I can make my parents wil
be proud of me. Amin....
Woww fatmaa,, your dreams is amazing, and your choice that prever to be enterpreneur very rarely desired by student college from accounting major,, :-)
BalasHapusThank you Ana. :-)
HapusHi Fatma :)
BalasHapusI think some of your sentences should be :
-- I think that being a police woman is a chalenging job --> challenging
-- And then, I followed some step of police woman’s selection --> steps
--...and be the important staff as accountant in there --> and be an important staff...
-- And I hope that I can make my parents will be proud of me. --> ...make my parents proud of me
please correct me back if I am wrong, thank you and good luck fatma ;)
Hallo Nora.
HapusThank you for your correction. It is so useful for me, especially for my knowledge about English. :-)
Hi Fatma, I think your work is good.
BalasHapusThis is good. I hope that you can reach your dreams :)
Thank You Ida. :-)
HapusHello Fatma,
BalasHapusI hope that you can reach your dreams.
Fatma,I think your sentece "of Accounting." the letter "a" should be small font.
Hi Dani. Thank you for your correction. But I think in this sentence " of Accounting", the letter "a", it must be written with capital letter, because it claim a Department of a Faculty, that is important and spesific. Beside that, The Name of Department can stand alone. So, I think that in this sentence " of Accounting ", the letter "a", it must be written with capital letter. But, If My opinion is not same with your opinion and it is wrong, I hope that you can correct me back again and we can learn together. Thank you.
HapusBy the way, I want to correct a word of your comment "....sentece" it must be written "....sentence". Am I right?. Please correct me back if I am wrong. Thank you.