Jumat, 20 Maret 2015
Each
person certainly got dreams . As a child I wished to become a civil servant, but as
an adult I've heard stories of entrepreneurs who have been successful at a
young age. Then I became interested in becoming an entrepreneur.
I like to be a businessman, a
businessman working at will, not bound rules and not ruled, but ruled.
Nonetheless, entrepreneur is not an easy job, a lot of challenges to be faced,
such as rising prices of production goods (inflation) this can declining purchasing power. Thus, interchangeable affect
profits acquired, in addition to the problems facing workers employers are
demanding for wage increases.
Another reason why I prefer as an entrepreneur, because I want to develop a business of my parents, that diner, my dreams - dreams can change the shop into a restaurant or a restaurant. I've seen the potential of my food stalls, namely my mother's cooking is so delicious, not least by the sense of the restaurant.
Another reason why I prefer as an entrepreneur, because I want to develop a business of my parents, that diner, my dreams - dreams can change the shop into a restaurant or a restaurant. I've seen the potential of my food stalls, namely my mother's cooking is so delicious, not least by the sense of the restaurant.
I work hard to study hard way, and as much as I help my parents when I went home. Because of my parents' efforts in the field of food, I tried to gradually learn to cook, that is by helping the mother when cooking.
Hello Mugi....
BalasHapusI will correct your task.
Mugi, I think your setence incorrect "I did like to being a businessman". My correction is "I like to be a businessman". Because after "to" use verb 1.
thanks Mugi.
I find your sentence is incorrect, "that diner, my dreams". My correction is "that is diner, my dreams". Your clause in that sentence, please add verb "is".
BalasHapus1. "Nonetheless entrepreneur is not an easy job". My correction is "Nontheless, entrepreneur is not an easy job". Because after the adverb it should be comma.
BalasHapus2. "...purchasing power, thus...". My correction is "...purchasing power. Thus...". You should replace comma the fullsttop, because your sentence too long.
3. "....purchasing power, thus interchangeable...". My correction is "...purchasing power. Thus, interchangeable..". Because after the adverb it should be comma.
Please feed back me, Mugi.
Thank you Dani, your comments is helpful.
Hapus