My Dreams

Posted by : Unknown Jumat, 27 Maret 2015

Hallo everyone.
[sorry for late post]
My name is Anjasmara Urdi Anza, you can call me Anjas. I'm student in Semarang State University, I'll tell you about my dreams. Start From My Childhood. When i was chil, i've many dreams, Like I want to be Pilot, Police and anymore. but when i'm in Junior High School was change, in Junior High School My Dream is Want to be teacher, i think it's good profession because i've a very good teacher in my school. When im in Senior High School my dreams still want to be teacher and i've other dream like want to make my parent be pround of me. And now, I get my final choise of my dreams that is want to be a banker, i wish to god if in the future i work in "Bank Indonesia" aminn.

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Unknown31 Maret 2015 pukul 00.49
Thanks,Anjas. Do you think "i" is correct? :)
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Unknown31 Maret 2015 pukul 20.05
The sentence " I'm student in Semarang State University", something missing here. Can you guess?
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Unknown19 April 2015 pukul 10.02
Anjas,
The sentence " When I was chil, I have many dreams,"
I think your sentence incorrect. It should be, "....., I had many dreams.". Because past tense and you should replace comma the fullstop.
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Unknown22 April 2015 pukul 19.37
Hi Anjas. This is good. I hope that you can reach your dreams. But I want to give you a correction about this sentence "..., I get my final choise of .....". In this word " choise ", I think that it must be written " choice". Am I right?. Please correctme back if I am wrong. Thank you.
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