Kamis, 19 Maret 2015
My dreams
hello, my name is Ana ariani, I have a
lot of dreams, but i am just focus on some dreams. when I was at elemantary
school, i wanted to be a stewardess
because i wanted to take my parent to a makkah and around the world.
when i was at junior high school my
dream was change become accountant, so i choose accounting major at vocational
high school to continue my study, and at this moment, i am second semester at accounting major of semarang state university,
although when i was registered to continue
my study at university, i almost chose elemantary school teacher majoring.
but now, i am really focus to be an accountant so from it i prefer to be a public sivil servent because i
think my live will be secure and not cause of fuse other people. after that i
will renovation my parent’s home, buy a land, buy a wet rice field, take my
parent to Makkah , and everything i will
do to make my parent happy.
thats all for me, thanks ^-^
Ana Ariani
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Accounting C
Hi Ana.That is good. But Let me give you corrections that you must use a capital letter at the first letter of the word that is in the beginning of sentences. Besides that, you have to use the capital letter for the name of a place such as "Makkah". And then, Let me to give you a correction about this sentence " .......i will 'renovation' my parent’s home". I think it is better if you use this sentence "..... I will ' renovate' my parent's home" than ".......i will 'renovation' my parent’s home". Am I right?.Please correct me back if I am wrong. Thank you.
BalasHapusWaw the good corrections fatma, because I am often forget that matter. thanks Fatma :-)
HapusHello Ana.. :) I hope your dreams will be come true. But Ana, I give you correction about word "sivil servent" it must be written "civil servant". Am I right?
BalasHapusPlease correct me back if I am wrong. Thanks :)
oke sofi, thanks
Hapusmaybe I was sleepy so I was typo :-)