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- Project #1 (Individual Tenses)
Hello my friends :) This is my Project #1 tasks, let's read and give me responses. I don't classify my work into some part or tenses so you can identify what the tenses are in my work.
Recently, the exchange rate of rupiah to dollar is weak. It makes many effect in our country economy. One of them is the increasing in fuel oil price.
Three days ago, the price of fuel oil increased again. It made a big effect in our market. It caused almost all of basic commodities prices rising. Whereas in Indonesia the increasing and decreasing in fuel oil price has happened for more than one times.
When Jokowi nominated his self to be a president, he was working as a governor in DKI Jakarta Province. He was working in the middle of his term. At that time, he was doing some of his programs to improve DKI Jakarta's economy.
Before Jokowi became a governor in DKI Jakarta Province, he has become a mayor in Solo city. He has made many programs there such as a program for free school payment up to Senior High School. He has become a good leader figure for Solo’s society.
In Indonesia there was many cases of corruption. One of the fenomenal cases of corruption was corruption by Gayus Tambunan. He had received many money from made flasification of tax for many factory. He had obscured a lot of tax money in Indonesia. And it had made a lot of losses in our country economy.
Hello Tri.
BalasHapusHow are you ?
It is a ice job. But I find amistake in your job. Your last sentence is incorrect because the conjungtion is not allowed in the beginning of the sentence "He had obscured a lot of tax money in Indonesia. And it had made a lot of losses in our country economy.". For correction, you can combine your last sentence with the sentence above it by giving comma = "He had obscured a lot of tax money in Indonesia, and it had made a lot of losses in our country economy."
Please correct me back if I am wrong.
Thanks.
Sorry, correction for my commant, "a mistake" not "amistake"
BalasHapusHello Dani, I'm a life and kicking. How about you?
BalasHapusThank you for your correction Dani, I'll think and learn more about it.
I'm sorry Dani, which one is right commant or comment? I think comment is the right one, isn't it?