Selasa, 31 Maret 2015
Write Sentence (Individual Work)
Simple Present Tenses
- Indonesia are import many fruits from Thailand every week.
- Dewi studies accounting in Semarang State University.
- Indonesia’s economic growth is always changing.
Simple Past Tenses
- Group two, accounting C produced chocolate banana to fill task entrepreneurship yesterday.
- Inflation in Indonesia reached 1,5% last year.
- Indonesia became the largest palm oil exporting countries last year.
Simple Present Continuous
- Mr. Bambang Santoso is being a successful businessman because he now owns three famous restaurants in my country.
- We are producting “pangsit” in the Vannes’s boarding house.
- They are developing a new manufacture located at 15 Jenderal Sudirman.
Simple Past Continuous
- When the government was raising the price of basic electricity tariffs (BET) and fuel oil, prices of basic commodities to be upgraded.
- When prices of basic commodities was raising, community welfare is bad.
- When I was selling foods, I gave discount to last buyer.
Simple Past Perfect
- The government had been developing mall in the some big country in Indonesia.
- They had been investment much money to their business.
- Indonesia had been very bad economic crisis in 1998.
Hello sofi :) It is a nice job. But, I find a mistake in your sentence. "Indonesia are import" it must be written by "Indonesia imports", am I right? Because "import" is a verb so it must be written without to be in simple present tense.
BalasHapusHello Tri Rohani ;) Yes, you are right Tri. Thanks for your correction.. It can be a good input for me and I hope next time I can more thoroughly.. :) Tri Rohani, can you correct my sentence if you find another mistake? It is will make me happy. :D
HapusOkay Sofi I'll try to correct your sentences but if you disagree with my opinion you have to say to me okay? :) Because I still study like you so maybe I'll make mistake too on correcting your sentences.
HapusSofi, In my opinion this word "Task entrepreneurship" must be written by "entrepreneurship task because it is a noun phrase isn't it?
"he now owns three...." I think it will easier to understand if it written by "Now, he owns three...."
"prices" I think it should be written by "the prices" because it is a subject so it need a determiner like "a, an, and the".
"prices of basic commodities was raising" In my opinion it must be used "were" because the word commodities is plural.
"They had been investment", Did you mean "mereka telah menginvestasikan"? If the meaning is it, so it must be written by "they had ivested". Because investment is a noun.
Please, correct me back if I am wrong Sofi :)
Okey Tri, thank you for your comment. I get more knowledge from your correction to improve my sentence :).
Hapushello sofie :). it is a nice job. But i find mistake too in your sentence. In Past Continous Tense you written "is bad". You must written " was bad", Iam right ?
BalasHapusYes, you are right Dewi. Thanks for your correction :).
HapusDid you mean "am I right?" Dewi?
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BalasHapusHello Dewi :)
BalasHapusYou have to write "I' in capitalize. Right ???
Hello Tri ?
BalasHapusI find mistake in your sentence.You must have to put fullstop because your sentence too long. And please correct again your comment. I see many mistake.
Thanks Tri.
Hello Sofie,
BalasHapusYour job is nice, but I find mistake too in your sentence "Indonesia are import many fruits...".You have to write "Indonesia import many...". Because "import" is verb, so it is doesn't need to be.
Please correct me back if I am wrong :)
Thanks.
Hello Dani,
HapusThank you for your correction. I think it is not be "Indonesia import many.." but it must written "Indonesia imports.." because "Indonesia" is singular subject so verb must use s/es. Am I right Dani? :)
You're well come Sofi :) don't forget to filter it.
BalasHapusOk Dani, thanks for your comment. I hope you may give me the correction of my sentences, so I can know where is my mistakes. Thanks before :)