Rabu, 01 April 2015
Assalamu’alaikum wr wb.
Hi friends, in this project I will tell you about
the biography of someone whose bussiness is very successful, she is Mrs.
Meneer. If you asked me why I choosed her, it’s reason is she could make me so
amazed after I had read her biography in the internet which told to me about
how she could find the solutions for her problems although there were
extrusions from the dutchmen. It’s not an easy thing, because just a bit of
people whos live as same as her, could do the same and got a succees. So, that
is her biography and I hope that you would find some thing which can make you
more motivated.
Mrs. Meneer or Lauw Ping Mei is Tionghoa descent,
was born in Sidoarjo in 1895. Meneer’s name is not has because she is the wife of a Dutch,
but the name is devided from the name of rice, it’s Menir and because of the
Dutch language influence, the name
written into Meneer. She got the expertises to mix some dill when the Dutcmen
started to abusing their power in twentieth century. In that time, she lived in Semarang wiht her
husban whose name is Ong Bian Wan was born in Surabaya, sience they had
married. Because her husban was sick, they could fled, althougt they were
suppressed by the Dutchmen. So, to helped alay his disease, she made a
madicinal ingredients from some dill. After that, the husban got well, and Mrs.
Meneer was conscious of her skills to make a madicinal ingridients which the
popular name in Java is Jamu. Than, she developed and trained her skill, until
a lot of people who atmitted her skill and consumed the Jamu which made by Mrs.
Meneer. Because Jamu was very popular until in the other town, Mrs. Meneer
could’t comply with a human’s request, so she and family tried to grow up the
bussines which has brand a picture of Mrs. Meneer. But, in 1978 she was died,
and her bussines was continued by her grand child.
I thing thats all enought, I’m sorry for my mistake
and Thank you.
Wassalamu’alaikum wr. Wb.
hay group 4 :) so good person she is (y) .
BalasHapusBut there's a little wrong sentence that I think less incorrect. But it just my opinion, when it's still wrong please recorrect.
The sentence "it’s reason is" should be written by "the reason is".
and the sentence " Meneer’s name is not has" should be written by without 'has'
" the name is devided from the name of rice" from this sentence, is the word "devided" typo? if itsn't, what's the meaning?
In this sentence "the Dutcmen started to abusing ", after word 'to' you must use verb I without 'ing' so "started to abuse", and then there are words that typo, like " husban,althougt ,could’t",
"a madicinal ingridients" the word 'ingridients' should written without 's' because it's singular, but if it's plural you must erase the word 'a', and then in this sentence " they could fled,to helped" you must write without 'ed' or you must use verb one. oh ya,on your article I read there's written "alay", what's the meaning of it? :D
sorry If I'm fussy :D haha thanks guys, you're amazing (y) nice ! :)
thank you for your criticism. it be a lesson to our group
BalasHapus#kwak
you're welcome wisnuuuu :D
Hapus