Hello my name is Ida Nuryanti
Yes i have dream.I have some dream .my dream was to graduate from college on time with good IP,want to be a dutiful son to parent and are always happy my parents,and thaen i want to work at a company wel known to be accountant,to achieve my dream of semarang state university majored in accounting. I want my dreams come true one by one, so that my parents can be happy when I became successful and achieved my dream.
I want to be a civil servant because my dream to be an accountant a company and became a permanet amployee . In addition to being a civil servant,I wanted to be an bussineswoman as my side job, with the choice I want to be an entrepreneur in the future I will be able to create jobs for people who are stillunemployed. I want to have a car rental and residental business.
Kamis, 19 Maret 2015
Hi Ida :)
BalasHapusI think some of your sentences should be :
-- I have some dream --> some dreams
-- my dream was to graduate from college --> my dream is graduating from college ...
-- want to be a dutiful son to parent and are always happy my parents --> I want to be a dutiful daughter and make them happy
-- and thaen i want to work at a company wel known to be accountant --> and then I want to work at a well known company as an accountant
-- I want to be a civil servant because my dream to be an accountant a company --> I want to be a public civil servant because my dream is to be an accountant in a company
please correct me back if I am wrong, thank you and good luck Ida ;)
I think a company and became a permanet amployee is correct is
BalasHapusa company became a permanent employer
Thank you Anis for the correction :) :*
HapusHi Ida. This is good. I hope that you can reach your dreams. Well...Let me to give you a correction about this sentence " ......and became a permanet ' amployee ' ". I think it must be written " ......and became a permanent ' employee '. Is it right?. Please correct me back if I am wrong. Thank you.
BalasHapusHello Ida,
BalasHapus1. "i" must be capitalized.
2. "some dream" must be "some dreams". Because there is the word "some" the noun should be plural.
3. After fullstop, please use capitalize.
4. "IP" is incorrect. My correction is "GPA"
Don't for get feed back me, Ida.
Thanks:)